Knite Character Designs

Here's the character design for Project: Knite

Although I already have 2 and half chapters of Knite sketched out, I'm still rather uncertain about what style I should finish it in. Originally I was going for a anime watercolor style like in this one [link] but it wasn't working out so well so I switched to a more anime style with less watercolor.

I still don't know if this style will work out so please tell me what you guys think of this style. Is it too typical, boring, anything? Especially the eyes, I was going for a simplistic look but I don't know if that just looks weird... I'm open to all suggestions!

Thanks for helping!